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by YDD04/26/04

Watch how you read

Simple words that are to be read several ways.
The line breaks are purposefully done to allow this.
Another fine poem from this poet.

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by LeBroz12/31/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.



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