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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Weeds and love and Emily Dickinson!

Love how it all mixes in your imagination and spills out in poetry. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
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"pick flowers, destroy our definitions of weeds

and Emily Dickinson?s herbarium

are all here

within the troposphere"

I swear I left a comment yesterday---

I have thought a great deal about the definition of weeds...but I cannot help but wonder if you are destroying poor Emily's herbarium or just its definition..... This piece was especially moving to me.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
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Interesting use of phrases,

but what "are all here"?

This line distracts me from the rest of the poem.

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