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One of several submissions on the same subject by Uncle Pervey today.

This one uses the mnemonic device of repeating the final two syllables of each line to set up a rhythmic pattern.

U.P. has some strong poetic inclinations and devices. One wonders what he could do with a serious subject.

Have you thought of breaking this up into several or more stanzas?

Like:

There is my Sis, oh yass oh yass,

She has a pretty ass an ass.

It pooches out just right just right,

And makes me want to bite to bite!

It's such a luscious meat good meat,

A really scrumptious treat a treat.

The shelter of her crack her crack,

Makes my lips go smack go smack!

It may make it easier for the reader to follow.