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All Comments on 'The Origin Of Hurricanes'

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
excellent

in my opinion... short and sweet, says so much and it has a wonderful rhythm :)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
Good line:

Which butterfly turbulence spawned all this?

Very nice poem, lin.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Was it a Brazilian butterfly?

Very fine for just a four line poem.

You manage to bring in so much in just so little.

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