All Comments on '"I tremble..."'

Great marriage of image and words!

I had your lyrical ear and way with words. Excellent, as usual.

-Colly

In image, milieu, and feel through word.

and an image. A slightly fermented passion... well done.

jim : )

as usual, my dear Lauren. Thank you.

Your poems are always excellent... it's impossible not to see your tremendous passion. I've missed reading them... :)

to fall upon your words and devour each, then became splashed with warm paint

for a lovely poem!

One of the rare poets on the site who consistently weds words to quality images.

The sensuousness of some of your lines are arousing. "...Bridges in revisited folds." Intensely erotic! Beautiful rendering. Loved the picture.

Passion abounds, brought to life by an erotic picture of a woman's beautiful curves...along with sensual words. Excellent.

hm, can't believe i haven't looked at your poetry yet... have to read more now...

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.

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to anticipation or under use, TK U MLJ LV NV

thank you for sharing..enjoyed it!

Byron lives!

I really enjoyed this writing, the end was amazing.

Keep writing.