All Comments on 'No Longer My Son... Ch. 02'

This story gets better. I am so pleased to see part 2, having enjoyed part 1 so much. More please...

Who would have guessed mother and son. Quite a story amazing.

Quick to the point a real hardon story

congrats......... its better than ch 1.

but it still needs hot detail. its still too short.but keep goin

congrats......... its better than ch 1.

but it still needs hot detail. its still too short.but keep goin

Loved it, what a bitch. presumably you intend to intoroduce Louise and pailine to each other soon?

lou want what his dad forgot to do to her,knock her up.she wants to move in with the mother and son,become family.

you write great stories,but where is the other chapters.you leave us hanging.

great story waiting for ch.3 :):)

please continue with chapter 3, chapter 1 is good and chapter 2 is even better. It is a rush within its self. You must finish the journey of the story line.

Did not like the end, and the way it ended.