by emap
It didn't sound real. I doubt that you give head to some guy, and all of a sudden, 3 guys come up and nail you.
Also, "Earl" can't have the energy to last an hour.
It was a really good story made me feel like i was one of the guys keep up the good writing email me escapethelookingglass@yahoo.com
Lovely story, wish I was one of those lucky fuckers.
very good story. I love the simple direct way you tell it. The way each guy just took his turn with you was hot. What a slut you were ....just waiting to be poped. To bad you didn't get pregnant, 9 months to wait and wonder who the baby would look like.
it was ok.. not they best.. you should have said what color they were and stoped with the pauses those are anoying.. my first time drinking it didnt take me a few glasses of wine, it took like 5 drinks and 4 shots.. also im a virgin i would never wanna be fucked that many times after i just lost it and not by that many people.. you dont know what they have..
nice would have loved for her to get pregmnant. And does it really hurt when girls get deflowed?
I am litterally creaming my panties reading this story. I can feel those rock hard cocks sliding in and out of my pussy. Very hot.
A great fantasy tale.
It deserves a sequel.
I was surprised she didn't call out for Steve before being
taken. I would have thought she would have wanted him to
take her first and break her hymen.
Both she and he seemed indifferent to that.
And she speaks of him as if they regularly couple, yet she's a virgin.
Peter.
People don't cum as often as the girl in the story, not even first timers. I mean come on, every five thrusts?! Yeah right...
And no one could last an hour of continious thrusting.
The way you tell the story... it's like you're either really hungover or still drunk. If you're really the type of girl to not only let 3 random guys have sex with you, but also cum in side of you...then you deserve what's coming to you, which is an STD or two...or six.
Thanks for helping America become a statistic.
You didn't even go into detail on when you were about to cum... Just said "I came 38 times, blah blah." Leaves no suspense or build up.
Not my cup of tea - disappointed.
Bad grammar "your" instead of "you're". Unbelievable plot and characters I couldn't relate to because I knew nothing about them. Sorry not what I look for in a story. Keep trying, maybe you will write something better.
that was sooooo... exciting i was gettin turned on through the whole story
Has a lot of trigger words in the title, but it is still a POS.