All Comments on 'Virgin Gangbanged To Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
ohh yeah

this story really got me going. i made me wanna get fucked hard

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Make it realistic puhlese!

Erotism works, not crassness ... try again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Didn't sound legit

It didn't sound real. I doubt that you give head to some guy, and all of a sudden, 3 guys come up and nail you.

Also, "Earl" can't have the energy to last an hour.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Ohhh yea

It was a really good story made me feel like i was one of the guys keep up the good writing email me escapethelookingglass@yahoo.com

Gus AsparGus Asparover 18 years ago
I want to have a go...

Lovely story, wish I was one of those lucky fuckers.

voltsolvoltsolalmost 18 years ago
what a slut

very good story. I love the simple direct way you tell it. The way each guy just took his turn with you was hot. What a slut you were ....just waiting to be poped. To bad you didn't get pregnant, 9 months to wait and wonder who the baby would look like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
blah

it was ok.. not they best.. you should have said what color they were and stoped with the pauses those are anoying.. my first time drinking it didnt take me a few glasses of wine, it took like 5 drinks and 4 shots.. also im a virgin i would never wanna be fucked that many times after i just lost it and not by that many people.. you dont know what they have..

SluttieSammieSluttieSammieover 16 years ago
Mmmmmm lucky girl x

Sounds like a great night out to me x

maggot420maggot420over 16 years ago
Wonderful

I love your voice. It has such an easy flow. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice

nice would have loved for her to get pregmnant. And does it really hurt when girls get deflowed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
so wet

I am litterally creaming my panties reading this story. I can feel those rock hard cocks sliding in and out of my pussy. Very hot.

HedonistusHedonistusalmost 15 years ago
Sequel.

A great fantasy tale.

It deserves a sequel.

I was surprised she didn't call out for Steve before being

taken. I would have thought she would have wanted him to

take her first and break her hymen.

Both she and he seemed indifferent to that.

And she speaks of him as if they regularly couple, yet she's a virgin.

Peter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Eh

People don't cum as often as the girl in the story, not even first timers. I mean come on, every five thrusts?! Yeah right...

And no one could last an hour of continious thrusting.

sexssalotsexssalotover 14 years ago
Sober up

The way you tell the story... it's like you're either really hungover or still drunk. If you're really the type of girl to not only let 3 random guys have sex with you, but also cum in side of you...then you deserve what's coming to you, which is an STD or two...or six.

Thanks for helping America become a statistic.

You didn't even go into detail on when you were about to cum... Just said "I came 38 times, blah blah." Leaves no suspense or build up.

Not my cup of tea - disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

dam u a hoe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
hot

that was tooooo great

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Bad grammar "your" instead of "you're". Unbelievable plot and characters I couldn't relate to because I knew nothing about them. Sorry not what I look for in a story. Keep trying, maybe you will write something better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Josh

that was sooooo... exciting i was gettin turned on through the whole story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!

More more more! Be more realistic.

Bill69billBill69billover 9 years ago

A little cock awakens any slut!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Trains are the best way to pull the shut out of girls lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Waste of time.

Has a lot of trigger words in the title, but it is still a POS.

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