All Comments on 'The First Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The highest form of depravity--

Is to copulate with an inferior species like blacks. It is better with an animal, cleaner anyway !!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 12 years ago
Subtle?

I find little or nothing (except the blurb describing this post) that suggests she is currently a wife, although she clearly has been (and perhaps still is). Likewise, nothing in the story to suggest his (or her) ethnic origins! Jen is probably his wife, but maybe a male Punjabi room-mate. It is very unclear why 'downstairs' is going to conceal their liaison any more than the original room, and they don't seem to be time-constrained, once 'downstairs,' although cuddling or other après-coitus pleasantries are avoided due to Jen's still-imminent arrival.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It's the truth what they say..... once you go black...

you NEWER get your self respect back !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hang.

NIGGER LOVER

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
fuckyou nigger.

What happen, you get shot in a drive by.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Cuck writer

Babblelon certainly has his.mind on the ethnic dildo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

A very poor story, drivell. 2 cheaters and no consequences. Lets not glorify cheaters or their actions even in a made up story.BJH

Busman19639Busman1963910 months ago

Not very exciting.

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