by hammingbyrd7
I really fell in love with your 'Preacher Series'. But this piece, while vaguely connected, seems to skip huge periods of time, and a ton of development of plot.
I assume you did it to forward your overall storyline for the universe you'd created, but it was a shame to see something appear so rushed/unconnected, after I'd come to respect the detail and development that marked your other works.
I really enjoyed your method of creating the entire system/setting of the story with very short references. The conclusion surprised me by being labeled epilogue when I thought I was just getting started, but you wrapped it up as what I'd describe as a wonderful short story.
Thank you.
I've read several of your stories and enjoyed them all.
I'm working my way up to "It's my Party"