All Comments on 'Love's Equal Loss'

by hammingbyrd7

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Beautiful

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Lovely.

Loved it. More, more !

freshstart79freshstart79almost 13 years ago
disjointed...

I really fell in love with your 'Preacher Series'. But this piece, while vaguely connected, seems to skip huge periods of time, and a ton of development of plot.

I assume you did it to forward your overall storyline for the universe you'd created, but it was a shame to see something appear so rushed/unconnected, after I'd come to respect the detail and development that marked your other works.

Hale1Hale1almost 13 years ago
NOT Disjointed

I really enjoyed your method of creating the entire system/setting of the story with very short references. The conclusion surprised me by being labeled epilogue when I thought I was just getting started, but you wrapped it up as what I'd describe as a wonderful short story.

bigbearz9bigbearz9almost 12 years ago
Nice, very nice

Thank you.

I've read several of your stories and enjoyed them all.

I'm working my way up to "It's my Party"

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awwww

I love this story

It deeply touched my heart

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