All Comments on 'A Lifetime in One Moment'

Thouroughly enjoyable. The eroticism didn't override the story line.

Oh man, this story is fantastic. You made the people, the emotions, and the eroticism all effortlessly real.

Richly romantic and sensatively written. What a fortunate young man to have such an experiance with someone who genuinely cared about him. It would be impossible to forget what he learned in that one day. Im am sure that his marriage was rich and fufilling for both he and his wife because he ahd the best possible instruction and a model for life

This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read here. You caught the emotions of both and expressed them with such an elegance that drew me into the story.

A wonderfully tasteful combination of romance and eroticism. I loved it, and look forward to more submissions from this talented and imaginative writer.

Simply amazing.

Every single word binds their love together. Happening in a moment, it will last their lifetime.

That was the most beautiful story I have ever read on this site. It pulled out powerful old memories and left me with that tight feeling in my stomach. I have never been so excited, joyful, and sad.

A beautiful and erotic tale of true love.

Change from pool boy to yard boy and this could have been me & my first love fifty five years ago. My gift was a mans onyx ring. I think of her fondly & with love every time I wear it.

Maybe the best written story I have ever read on this site. Beautifully done. Touching.

...but someone beat me to it. A wonderful story.

One of the truly literate stories on this site. A sexy, but tender story supremely well told. This is what I've been looking for.

Stupendous story telling!

So richly endowed with stunning description and imagery.

So perceptive and wonderfully expressed from both's point of view - both were mature and for each it was their First Time!

As Jimi H said " 'scuse me while I kiss the sky!" which was his and Laura's exultant anthem.

May you never stop writing and giving and huge pleasure.

for a touching and yes damit beautiful story. One of the few peices on here to bring a tear to my eye. You have a gift, thank you for sharing it.

This story is just amazing, it was erotic and passionate and loving all at the same time, I only hope my first time is as beautiful and meaningful as this one. This story truly gives me something to look foward to.

This story stopped me in my tracks and lifted me to marvelous heights. Simultaneously touching and erotic, it is simply the finest story I have seen grace this site. My sincerest thanks and compliments on a stellar tale.

It is simply the best story that I ever read in French, English or Chinese!

this story was amazing! touching and truly one of the best stories on this site. Beautifully written and well constructed- true literature. Well done to the author, absolutely terrific.

...but you owe me a pot of linguini, C.C. Rider. I got so engrossed in the story that I burnt my dinner!

Keep up the good work!

I started reading this story the other day but had to go out...

I'm glad I found it to finish reading, it's one of those stories I'll remember for a long time to come.

"A Lifetime in One Moment", is truly classic erotica in the purest sense and perfect form.

C.C., you are indeed a MASTER STORYTELLER.

Thanks for writing this story and for posting it. I agree with the other comments, this is the best story I have ever read on Literotica. Thanks for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading everything else you have posted.

I am also thankful, once again, for this new feature, which allows public comments to draw the cream to the top.

What a delightful surprise! A story, with a truly plausible plot and meaning, that combines romance and sexuality in an elegant style. I could feel the ache and longing, fulfilled and not, while I read it and now. Keep up the great work.

A very nicely done story. A joy to read.

If anyone should ever ask what erotica is and does, this is the perfect example.Well written, involving, touching all emotional depths. Thank you.

Congratulations on a well deserved award for this touching, well-crafted and delightful story that engages the reader on several levels and explores the complexity of human relationships in an unique way. Bravo!

So many levels .. so many layers. Thank you for taking the time to finely hone this tale obviously written by a craftmaster. It met that delicate balance of raw sensuality and subtle charm.

Words are not there to express how this story touched me. I am disabled at age 42 and my best sex is now behind me. Thank you for helping me relive so many times of true lovemaking in my past. I will read this story every time I begin to feel lonely and worthless.

Thank you so much and keep writing. It can bring happiness and be a blessing in many more ways than you think.

Congratulations on the award for the story. This is very romantic and touching. Very deserving of the award. I look forward to reading more.

thank you. what a touching and lovely story.

it made me remember so much.

Because of your gift for prose I became undeniably horny and had to seduce my husband. Thank you for a passionate, beautiful story. I do hope you'll write much more in the future...

H

An intellectual "fuck story"? OR a sensual, sexy love story?

Either way (or some way I cannot describe) it is the best I have read online.

Well done.

I had to wait and compose myself before I sat back down to write this...What a wonderful story. Thank you.

The BEST ever.... Thank you for posting it.

This was without a doubt the best story I have read here. I like all the different categories, and there is a lot of good stuff that can get you *excited*, but this was the only story I've read here that if something made me stop reading it half way through... I'd HAVE to come back to know what happened.

A very sensitive and believable story. I enjoyed the characters and the plot development. Great job!

very touching thoughtful and wonderful

Since I am female, I cannot really be in the same situation. But I still wish I was able. Damn, how I wish. Beautiful story writing, I applaud you. There is heart and soul in this story that I did not think could be communicated. From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for this story, for tonight it was my bedtime story. Thank you.

I'm an old(er) man and thought I understood it all, but by God, you made me understand the essece behind the old saying, "You can't go back home again." Thanks. Thanks a hell of a lot.

what can I say that hasn't been already said by many people. A beautiful story of love, so fulfulling.

master peice of sensitive and creative writing, multi dimensional,transtional episode description,brilliant aspect of time framing of episode,elequent elaboration of incedents and best of all the final freeze in time. Reality that all thing come to an end,and they leave YOU !behind frozen in time.

How unusual it is indeed to find an author so attuned to his or her own feelings such that they can describe the most elusive of human emotions. So often the cliche of a never-aging soul is bluntly stated, but you have given it meaning, a rare form of authenticity that takes this far beyond an ordinary piece of erotic literature. This is a gorgeous tale of blinding love brought to fruition in a moment's breath. Thank you, author.

With the tears welling up in my eyes, I thank you for this wonderful story of life, love and sharing.

What an absolutely FANTASTIC story. It covered the full range of emotions. Being a man in my late 60s the ending even brought tears to my eyes and I had to thank you for writing such a superb story. I have read so many wham, bam, thank you M'am stories but this is in a class all by itself.

Thank you and keep writing, you have a gift to share.

Greybeard

A story of beauty, honesty, loss and discovery. It made me cry...

Pure brilliance. Excellent short story.

good story, but the description as a "coming of age" and the general premise of the story struck me as a bit of obnoxious drivel.

This story is amazing. The characters are so beautifully written, and it made me want to go back in time to when I was a virgin. I wanted to relive that momment in time with the same kind of passionate, loving experience. You truly have a gift for words. Please continue to marvel your audiences with your tremendous talent.

Truly,

C. Magni

Very good best i have seen in a long time.

A beautiful story. Well written. Thank you. I wish there were more like it.

i loved it.tahs it that all i can ssay im speakless no words ca disgribe this story.

TWO WORDS, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL.

This was the most tender and erotic story I have read on this site!

What an absolutely outstanding story! If you don't write for a living, you ought to give that possibility some serious consideration...

You have a very unique talent for really writing stories and getting the reader involved, job very well done and keep up the great work, will look for more from you in the future..

I only wished the story was my story, I have never read such a tender story that was way more than erotic. It simply felt good to read about a once in a life happening that ended so well and had such a positive impact on a young mans life. Very nice, I hope you write more like this.

Sex is always better when both people feel deeply for each other. The "obnoxious" comment above simply means that the person has never experienced the unleashed ecstasy of love and sex comingling. Excellent story!

I hope my first time is as sweet and wonderful as this! Chelly, 18

Tears slowly fells down my face...

Thank you for sharing such beautiful and tender story.

Thank You! It is so rare these days to read any type of story of this magnitude, whether it is published or unpublished. This was one of the best pieces of work that I have read in a very long time. Many thanks!

You have an amazing story here that could be expanded into something publishable. It's beautiful and it deserves a wider audience than this. Maybe you should consider writing Laura's full story and turn it into a movie script or book.

The somewhat philosophical reflections on the nature of age are the gems that really set this story apart from others. You have a master's touch, knowing when to be brief and when to be more voluable. Keep writing.

This is one of the most moving and erotic accounts I have ever read. I have read it more than once because of its beauty, tenderness and ending pathos. I wish it had a happier ending. Laura could have made it more bearable for both if she had a less conventional idea of what love, relationship, and sex are.

A remarkably well crafted story, intense yet very simple, tangled as the emotions evolve yet clear and concisly phrased, tender and yet with fire and deep feeling, and with extraordinary polish. Very well done!

I enjoyed reading this story. You did a nice job of laying out the plot in a believable way. the narrator very aptly portrayed both the physical and emotional dimensions of the story. The sex scenes were told in a passionate, yet dignified way.

This story is absolutely beautiful. Every moment of it went straight to my heart. I love the fine details and expressions. I sensed real emotions and true love. It is the most passionate, romantic, erotic, and real story I have ever read.

This story was true and tender to anyone you love. I feel that you will always love the one you lose your virginity to, this story proves my belief. I was touched deeply by this story and I will take it with me throughout life as a guide to how love should be.

You are truly a beautiful writer, a one-of-a-kind with a unique, soulful, and bittersweet voice. It takes someone of great talent and skill to move me to tears, to make me actually think and question my ideals. And I don't come across stories that affect me like that very often, especially so in a a story where sex is also involved.

You sound to be a wonderful human being. Know that you inspired me, and I thank you.

It is well written, with the right words, conveying the right feeling of the story. It is a dream story for any young man, to find someone as Laura to really make love. You've got my attention.

Thanks.

I like sotries that are about more tyhan the simple physical act of love-making. This one was beautifully done. Congratulations!

never ever read a story in my lifetme.

never in my Life have I read such a soul satisfying Story. this story is excellently unique and well written... my praises to you sir..... in other words, this story was the BOMB son.

I can't beleive a story on this site made my cry. My boyfriend actually wanted me to read it, it's his favorite story. I just found so sweet and amazing.

Shit, that was pro'lly the best story I've read here, ever. Excellent wording, excellent everything. Provocative and emotional on top of being erotic... beautiful. Keep up the good work!

Well all i can say is this story rocks! to the core.I don't care if its real or fiction,the theme was just boggling.

Keep up the good work c.c

to write. Sensuous and touching in it's simplicity while so well written.

You need to unleash your talent in this fashion once more then once more then once more - well you get the idea.

With Very High Regard

This story was so meaningful. It wasn't just some mindless experience, it had depth.. Probobly the best piece of anything i have read in a while! Great job

Superbly written, fantastic characters & very well structured. Many thanks for sharing your talents.

Lovingly told in superb fashion.

absolutely amazing...best erotic story i've ever read. Erotic portions tastefully with one's imagination left to fill in what is purposefully left out, making this story come to life. The non-erotic passages are heartfelt and touching. I believe this could be a movie. Send out an advisory for future stories - yoshimitstu@gmail.com - they would be greatly appreciated

i would have given it a ten

Wonderful...That's all I have to say.

You have a very rare talent. Your story was wonderful. Thank you.

I have just found it and am blow away. The best ever. And everyone else agrees with me.<p>

Thanks for sharing

Fantastic Story. Had me smiling throughout the whole thing. And it could definitely be a movie. The kind that you watch over and over again. Loved it.

I couldn't stop read. It was realy good, how you talked about your feelings and the story as a whole. Maybe you should end when she said this is "A Lifetime in One Moment", as the title of the story, and make it perfect.. like Isaac Asimov short stories.. Good luck and thank you.

This is a truly beautiful story. You (the writer) must be a woman.Or, if written by a man, you are one of increasingly rare calibre.

A beautiful story. It was well written, extremely realistic, and I don't want to degrade your work, but it was also quite..sensual. It wasn't actually my taste in stories, but I do not regret reading this what so ever. Only because it is a tale filled with sadness and longing. And your writing ability sends those feelings right to the reader. Thank you so much for this. I hope everyone gets the unique "feelings" this story holds, and enjoys their time reading this truly great story.

-dusislo, ndus.nish@gmail.com

stories like this always make me kinda sad and happy at the same time...

it was a beautiful story........MY GOD,THE WAY U POTRAYED LAURA'S EMOTIONS!...IT WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL,i had mixed feelings about the ending......i half-wished they would meet again,but then.....may be she wasn't there anymore........

U HAVE A TALENT OF MAKING PEOPLE CRY....

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY STORY!!!!!THIS SHOULD BE PUT IN THE MOVIES!!!....A REAL LOVE STORY!!!!!

This magnificent love story depicts a three-alarm superSEX story tightly wrapped within a single weekend. Our sweet, virginal boy hero meets widow Laura's philosophy of sex and love with fantastic results. The wonderful aspect is the lovely, deep maturity of both persons, whose gorgeous sex together will forever adorn their lives & hearts, but never happen again. The ending is perfect. Thank you for a marvelously written story!

My second read of your story was just as delightful as your first. Please keep writing.

Superb...can i describe it with any other word?

Flood of guided emtion hand crafted royally...i also under gone such experience for 1 year with an army officer's wife...an ever lasting memory.

The wrist watch n care for it when gifted to Kevin was espciallll.....

Rarely written..must be god gifted flow of thoughts n might be written in single sitting..

great piece of true feelings...

I couldn't stop reading!

I enjoyed both the emotional and the physical relationships between the two characters as well as the dialogue and the character development.

The plot seemed a little rushed for my liking, but I appreciate concise works of literature as much as the lengthier works.

I wish that you'd write more!

This had all the elements and you wrote it so very well. Often a story feels like it should be longer, or could have been shortened, but this fit perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

This 'first time' story is written on a level far, far above most others on this site. Of course they shouldn't have been having sex, but for this story, it just seems right. It was tender, touching, and romantic, all at the same time. Well told, C.C. Rider.

Just gotta add my voice to the chorus above. This was an excellent story from the sex to their relationship and to the lovely way your wrapped it up. I'll be looking forward to more work from you.

very beautiful story. i feel if there is real love then age makes no difference. sad that they did'nt continue their lives together.

For someone whose first time was with an older woman, this hit home. It is also eerily similar to the movie "The Summer of '42". The story is very well written and the tension buildup is immense.

I have read alot of the stories on this site. Mostly my mindset is one of raw arousal and cheap thrills. This is the first story that affected me emotionally and even brought a knot in my throat. Don't get me wrong, it helped me achieve my "other" goal too... Very good writing.