All Comments on 'Foreplay'

Scintillating stuff, that.

the story absolutely suck.....the guy should ask for help writing

The only reason I didn't give it a 100 is b/c it's my dad and it freakss me out that he could lead a reader down a path of sexual thoughts like that.

Good story.

-SLSuch

Never would've guessed! Quite a fun read, but it could've been longer...but then, I'm not an author.

I loved it!

I do hope you're still writing and sharing it somewhere - it would be a shame keep your wit and talent under wraps.

Enjoyed

An author this talented trying to be cute is simply smarmy.