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by BooMerengue05/08/04

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Jim! How do you do it? Weave such sentiments! I'm goin back to read it again... I liked it! Thanks

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by tarablackwood2205/08/04

Intricate wordplay

that is carefully polished. Something to be read over and over.

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by twelveoone05/08/04

Fantastic

More of a question than critique, why no commas?
Whine your best lest
truth prevail as failed verse

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by 05/08/04

Oh........

A five from me! No-one has a way with words quite like you do jt. Reading this aloud is a feast of well placed words. TYVM.

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by Syndra Lynn05/08/04

Always a 5

never less, never more. This is great Jim!

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by Lauren Hynde05/08/04

Ouch!

What was that that you were saying about knife edge poetry? To be served with a nice Chianti, no doubt.

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