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Jim! How do you do it? Weave such sentiments! I'm goin back to read it again... I liked it! Thanks
Intricate wordplay
that is carefully polished. Something to be read over and over.
Fantastic
More of a question than critique, why no commas?
Whine your best lest
truth prevail as failed verse
Oh........
A five from me! No-one has a way with words quite like you do jt. Reading this aloud is a feast of well placed words. TYVM.
Always a 5
never less, never more. This is great Jim!
Ouch!
What was that that you were saying about knife edge poetry? To be served with a nice Chianti, no doubt.
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