All Comments on 'Birthday Foreplay'

by rpsuch

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
It Works!

I wonder if it would work if you turned the sexes around and let the husband speak. It certainly Works this way!

You've brought a new style to this board. Fable

thebulletthebulletalmost 20 years ago
Something completely different

This was an interesting story. Mostly it was different. I'm one of those people who when he goes to the movies will almost accept anything that is truly original, because most movies are derivitive. This is a story on Literotica that I never saw before. I loved it.

sherlock40sherlock40almost 20 years ago
Fantastic story

It's great to see another loving husband & wife story on this site. What a wonderful gift the husband made for his wife. Although I am sure that a few of the female readers will be saying he should be doing this all the time, not just as a special gift.

I applaud your efforts to write stories about actual "loving wives" and their husbands. It is refreshing after wading through the foul muck some of the other authors consider to be loving spouse stories. Please keep up the good work.

No matter what anyone says, just keep on writing. It is your right!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
fantastic romantic story

Very good. I have almost never read a romantic story without the explicit sex scenes. Very very good.

kilcannonkilcannonalmost 20 years ago
amazing where a story will take you

after I read your story it inspired me...my wife had just left for puerto rico to visit some family....i thought this would be a nice touch when she got back, so since i run my own business, i had the time to do it....i am now waiting for her to return.....

Kanga40Kanga40almost 20 years ago
It works every time

I have one of those at my place..

Washes, cooks, cleans, mows, digs - refuses to iron though,

BUT he does his other 'duties' so well...

rpsuchrpsuchalmost 20 years agoAuthor
Let me know

Kilcannon, please let me know how it goes when she returns.

dsidedsidealmost 20 years ago
Excellent,

a very loving, caring story. I think I'll go and give my wife of 43 years a big kiss.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
probably the worst story on literotica

one of the worst i have read......no, the worst

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Too True

Cute and funny. What made it so fun was that it was so true. Enjoyed it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
From your son

I can't believe I'm reading my dad's stories on literotica.

Story is too predictable.

-SLSuch

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
A different kind of foreplay.

Proves that romance isn't just about intimacy and sex, but is also about all of the little considerate gestures. It's a really refreshing outlook.

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
This is Deja vue! My Life!

It is eerie how this story parallels my life!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

One of the best on this site.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Heck, yeah!

SOLD! I don't care what he looks like, I want one just exactly like that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice story - but reality is 100% different

cute story. Reality is every single weoman who scream at him for fucking up cleaning OR the cooking OR the food shopping or wearing out the kids....

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Hillary in 2008!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wonderfull Tale

Perfect snapshot of the loving things that make a relationship work. Laughed so hard I nearly fell from my chair. Well done indeed. :)

VickieTernVickieTernover 13 years ago
Funny!

Beautifully illustrates "What I Learned from Literorica." Sorry if that's not the exact title, but I don't dare checking and risking loss of this accessible comment box now that I have it -- the others at the ends of all other stories all tend to be covered by Literotica's end matter on this computer, rendered unusable.

Discovered your writing only last night, and I now plan to spend the next few days reading all of it. It's thus far intelligent, witty, and articulate, even in the mimickry. Above all, morally perceptive in subtle ways I'm appalled to say I missed! Instance: your conclusion to HardDay'sNight's blackmail story -- not just the detective-like detecting of the situation's implicit implications, but the moral passion with which your character expressed his indignation and then topped the plot! Add "cunning" to the list of traits above.

Mr WolfMr Wolfover 11 years ago
Great Story - How easy it is to take it for granted

A marriage is a partnership with love, respect and trust as the foundations on which to build.

Loved the story and how true; I'm sure I'm not the only one who should be doing more of this type of thing for the love of my life!

PS don't tell her indoors about the second bit LMAO!!!

Bish08Bish08almost 10 years ago
I really think this is every woman's fantasy.

Well, one with kids in any case

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good, no Great

Loved it.... very nice....read it to my wife.....mistake LOL!!!!

boatbummboatbummalmost 7 years ago
Sweeeeeet!

Now there's a man who REALLY knows what turns a woman on! The next thing you know, he'll be doing the windows! ;-)

Thanks for a lovely, romantic little flash story!

MusicGuy4FunMusicGuy4Funover 6 years ago
Best reminder ever for married guys

I re-read this story every few months.

It’s a sure-fire way to Get Really and Truly Laid.

‘Nuf said

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110almost 4 years ago
Really cute

He delivered on the foreplay, only foreplay of a different kind. They she would really appreciate. How cool is that? A 5 Star Rating.

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xover 2 years ago

Clever.

A great plug for my notional T-shirt:

(front, small type, vertical list):

Laundry

Dishes

Vacuuming

Child Care

Back Rubs

(back, two lines of large font, across shoulders and just below shoulders blades):

Some guys will do ANYTHING to get laid!

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