All Comments on '"Simply Roses..."'

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
freeform gestaults... wow

and mimes... I loved the phrasing here and you by the hundreds-- echoing was great. Very good.

jim : )

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Miragealmost 20 years ago
A Well Done Assault to the Senses

The wording of the poem almost assaults the reader with its vivid intensity, making the poem spring to life. Very well written descriptions that encorporate all the senses, helping to add a depth often lacking within poetry. Great Poem!

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
Sometimes I just don't know what to put here

But I really like this poem!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Never knew a simple rose

Could be so

Intense!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
A Plea?

Interesting write. I liked the part reading 'I am ME alone myself the chosen...' a sort of take me, accept me as I am now what you would wish me to be. Very provocative and inquisitive write. Perhaps we are all simple Roses. Enjoyed these verses very much!

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Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...