by Ancient117331
and mimes... I loved the phrasing here and you by the hundreds-- echoing was great. Very good.
jim : )
The wording of the poem almost assaults the reader with its vivid intensity, making the poem spring to life. Very well written descriptions that encorporate all the senses, helping to add a depth often lacking within poetry. Great Poem!
But I really like this poem!
Interesting write. I liked the part reading 'I am ME alone myself the chosen...' a sort of take me, accept me as I am now what you would wish me to be. Very provocative and inquisitive write. Perhaps we are all simple Roses. Enjoyed these verses very much!