This is an excellent humorous poem. I LOVE IT!!!!! lmfao
I love poems you can sing to, hehehe, will be singing about Tommy Tucker for the rest of the day!!
haha..ok i'm glad i came to check out your writing..i'm gay and still was laughing through this..very clever!
i loved ur profile too, it's encouraging when i hear people say they found thier soulmate, at times it's easy to give up on such notions..i'm off to bed, but will find my way back to read one of ur stories, take care hun! xo, fawnie
This presents an amusing view of adolescent sexuality. Tommy has obviously been exposed to a darker version of "Snow White" than Walt Disney presented.
fed Snow White's deep hunger; long, hard and shiny, a pistoning plunger; she writhed and she wriggled,in abandoned lust's throes;hi ho hi ho, you're hot Snow White, it shows. Whistle a happy tune. Thanks, doormouse.
A well written parody.
I sent my friends a link to the poem. I think they'll like it as much as I did!
You do have a great gift for whimsey. Loved it, well done. I must admit I have no gift for rhyme. I envy you that.
That poem was frickin awesome...I would like to show it to my friends...LMAO You are awesome
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