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TommyTucker

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/16/04

OMG!!!!!

LMFAO!!!!!!!

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by Lord DragonsWing05/16/04

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is an excellent humorous poem. I LOVE IT!!!!! lmfao

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by Lady Lay05/16/04

LMAO!

I love poems you can sing to, hehehe, will be singing about Tommy Tucker for the rest of the day!!
Thanks doormouse!

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by fawnie05/21/04

lol

haha..ok i'm glad i came to check out your writing..i'm gay and still was laughing through this..very clever!
i loved ur profile too, it's encouraging when i hear people say they found thier soulmate, at times it's easy to give up on such notions..i'm off to bed, but will find my way back to read one of ur stories, take care hun! xo, fawnie

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by KenJames06/21/04

What Would Walt Say?

This presents an amusing view of adolescent sexuality. Tommy has obviously been exposed to a darker version of "Snow White" than Walt Disney presented.

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by tungtied2u06/24/04

Tommy's salami

fed Snow White's deep hunger; long, hard and shiny, a pistoning plunger; she writhed and she wriggled,in abandoned lust's throes;hi ho hi ho, you're hot Snow White, it shows. Whistle a happy tune. Thanks, doormouse.

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by seasparks07/04/04

ROFL

Pure genius!
A well written parody.

I sent my friends a link to the poem. I think they'll like it as much as I did!

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by Belegon08/11/04

my word DM...

You do have a great gift for whimsey. Loved it, well done. I must admit I have no gift for rhyme. I envy you that.

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by Anonymous08/11/04

OMG I loved it

That poem was frickin awesome...I would like to show it to my friends...LMAO You are awesome

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