All Comments on 'Short and Sweet!'

This one is at least short enough that it can be read without a feeling of drowning in a sufeit of crudity.

Uncle P. - a little goes a looong way.

"Would you like some coffee in your sugar?"

You have far too much syrup on your pancakes,

and how many pancakes can one eat at one time?

When your themes are so confined that after a few stanzas all the eye can see are repetitions of the same vulgarities, you may want to think about shortening the piece or widening what you write about.

If you are ripping these out every day, then you have found your milieu, but instead of filling the bowl with turds, maybe you can stop and admire just one loaf at a time. ;)