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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
granted

"Turquoise garnish on olive skin"

This is an interesting and original line!

"by marble taken for granite"

I like this. Very clever.

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An interesting play on the marble and granite

in this interesting poem. The rhyme in the last stanza felt a bit forced, but otherwise this was very good.

jim : )

UnseenChagrinUnseenChagrinalmost 20 years ago
I feel like Picasso

I love your play on words. You are quite talented!

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