All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 05'

girl he is twisted please don't have him to obsessed that he would kill her.

I don't know how this will all end, but can't wait to find out!! Again great job!

I agree...plz don't have him kill her..

this story seemed pretty interesting at first but now the twist is downright disturbing, this seems like rape and kidnapping and Jakes seems like a psycho

jake is way creepy but there's still something compelling about him...he's still sexy. i really like your creation of him as a villain/lover.

I have to agree with Anon from USA. This is getting slightly disturbing for romance...

Creeper extreme