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by Anonymous

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by Mikki6906/14/04

hot baby

You know certain places reconize same sex marriages...will you marry me? LOL

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It's Getting Hot In Here

need too take off all my clothes..lol very hot in here

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by angel4u2lust406/16/04

I have a FEVER now

damn, damn, hot voice as always

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by BillyDKidd06/22/04

Thank you

my wife and I both listened and now we are going to go react it while listening again

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by SexyLoni06/23/04

Grrrrrrrr

and Grrrrrrrrrrrrr

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by HarleysDreamLTD08/28/04

hot, oh baby its too hot

Take off all my clothes, its getting too hot

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by Anonymous08/17/05

Omg

Omg!!! I couldn't believe it. you made me cum so hard. I can't believe it. And i'm still hard. Omg hunny. You are so good at this. If you wish to contact me. My e-mail is hottymark@hotmail.com

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by Anonymous07/26/09

The voice is passionless

Good writing, but the voice seems unattached to what is going on. She is distant, almost a monotone. She is just reading it without much passion. It is totally not convincing.

Great story otherwise.

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