by Nemasis Enforcer
I enjoyed this story. I wish you would go on with the story from after the babies are born. I would like to know what happens in their lives after this.
POSERTIVE. no such word. "farther" means more distant, take a break, not brake! If you can't spell father then use dad
reminisce ?. simaltaniacly ?? You spoil a good story by carelessness
Don't worry about a few misspelled words lets not turn this into a job it's just in fun.