All Comments on 'It Was Meant To Be Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

totally awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More to the story

I enjoyed this story. I wish you would go on with the story from after the babies are born. I would like to know what happens in their lives after this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a pity

POSERTIVE. no such word. "farther" means more distant, take a break, not brake! If you can't spell father then use dad

reminisce ?. simaltaniacly ?? You spoil a good story by carelessness

DYNO224DYNO224over 9 years ago
Good Job

Don't worry about a few misspelled words lets not turn this into a job it's just in fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Yes but you need to keep the story going and finish it off

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5*, Not for 1 pagers

If you want 5*, then at least 2 pagers.

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