by DaddysBabyGurl420
Loving the story, but getting irritated at the short chapters. Just as it is getting good, you stop. Combine two chapters into 1. A single page is just too short.
Now that they know who it is, let them have some fun and let us read about it uninterupted for a couple of pages.
Other than that I think that you are doing a great job!!
What happened to the wonderfully slow, drawn out seduction? Dad became a psycho. The conversation part was so excruciatingly sex and then wham-bam thank you daughter.
The reason the story changed is that in the beginning while they were talking online, the girl kept saying she liked being ordered around, and being played with roughly. She makes it very clear she is quite submissive and wants to be dominated. To everyone else, thank you for your kind comments and the next section of the story will be up soon. I will try to make it longer, but that means it will take me longer to post a new section.
Hi Baby Gurl,
I waited to comment until I read all your stories. They are fucking good and you are an excellent writer. Your descriptive writing is wonderfully stiring. It is so wonderful that my fucking prick got hot and hard in the first story and just got harder and hotter through all of the stories. I`ll tell you what i`d like to do to and with you in the direct mail. In the meantime keep the stories cumming. I know they are really just beginning.
John P