All Comments on 'Moonlight'

closure. Well versed..liked the way it gathered steam. I'm boiling! Thanks, Kunda

The word wizard creates a lovely scene in poetry, nice poem.

A unicorn to your beauty-classic line! That first slide in is always best-So true! And this:

the chorus of moans rising into a scream,

as you buck underneath me you grip all around me

and as wet as you were you've now turned to cream.

My last thrust inside you on the edge of a dream

Damn, you make me hot. And your voice is the icing on the poetry cake. Very sexy.

What a voice. What a ride.

"languid liquid ballet"

Growl.

More than a little erotic!

..sensibel eingefaedelt. super.