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by Anonymous

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by 06/06/04

Why?

Did she drink Red Bull before the bed?

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by Anonymous06/06/04

An enjoyable story

Enjoyable, yet it seems to me to need more depth, more background. Too many references to past events that to which the reader has no reference. Basically this appears to be a viginette taken from a much larger life, fantasy or live.

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