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Bossing the Boss Ch. 08

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/07/04

Great humiliation!

Keep it up!

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by Anonymous06/07/04

Too Serious ?

We are not taking this too serious and nobody has the right to control another. Women and Men should be themselves and not be controled be anyone. We did not read this chapter and we will not read anymore. The subject is mind control, but it seems like Tom is humiliating and degrating the women. He and the author must really hate women or they are gay.
This is our last comment as we give no vote for Trash like this.
Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU

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by Anonymous06/07/04

great strory line

i've read this series from the beginning and it keeps getting better. be sure to make a clean ending

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by SEVERUSMAX06/08/04

Hello, girls, didn't it occur to you...

... Suzanne and Jennifer earned their humiliation by mistreating Tom? This is his revenge, and I enjoyed it again.

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by spyro112306/08/04

if you didnt read it????

if they didnt read it how do they know what its about??
Personaly i dont enjoy the humiliation stories unless the women find that they like it, or crave it.. or something, i keep waiting for these two to learn their lesson and come to some profound realisation

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by Anonymous06/11/04

another great chapter

this is definteley getting hotter
...and for those idiots that don't get it
this is a fantasy
get over it

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by Anonymous06/12/04

You're making me purrrr

ohh damn!

kitty loves it got me purring just like a lil kitten

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by Anonymous07/13/04

More?

Are we getting anymore??

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by Anonymous08/08/04

Keep it up

Please keep writing this great story.

I like it realy much.

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by Anonymous09/01/04

Not arousing

Babies getting aroused? Doesn't exactly turn me on. This is a great series, and I'd love to see another chapter, but this one was not nearly as effective as the previous ones.

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by Anonymous12/03/04

Great work fourscore

Great story, I'd love to read more let me know if you add anymore I'm in the group now with you and dragon.

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by Anonymous01/11/05

WOW!!!

keep at it Fourscore !!! Great story till now!
hope to read much more!

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by Anonymous11/21/05

Cum on we need more!

Loving the story so far, keep the good stuff rolling

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by Anonymous01/15/06

My God

This is just an amazing story, please tell me there is going to be more fun in store, this is my fave series on this site.

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by Anonymous02/20/06

think your stories are great

well I like how you make a bitchy lady turn herself into a sexual slut. Could you continue the humiliation baby scene with the, think we need more of that maybe the lawyer needs the double dildo treatment as well. Let the ladies do a 69 with all that cum running.Also what about Susane fucking her sister with a large black dildo in her pussy and her ass on film that would be interesting. keep up the good work

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by Anonymous03/14/06

Great

More of them as little girls and babies with Jodi, make them want to submit totaly with out the drug to Tom and Jodi and be there slaves and love it.

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by Anonymous06/12/06

Amazing!

Can't wait for the next chapter. The entire story line is incredibly hot!

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by oldwino09/02/06

Great story

Found tis story recently. My gf and I love the way its building. What happened to the rest? There should have been many more chapters. I see it's two years since last post. Please finish the series.

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by hornygranny04/23/07

Very exciting stories

You need to write the next chapter of this series...the one where their mother visits and is taken under Tom's spell as well.

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by Anonymous06/14/07

Impatient

I relaly like the story but Im beginning to hate Tom now. I want him to die like never bfore and I want someone to cut off is dick!!! im getting impatient for someone to turn the tables on him and kill him!!!! I like the stories tho.

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by Anonymous08/31/07

great

plz moooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee

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by Anonymous11/17/07

wow

this is great stuff cant wait to see more. but what will he do when the weekend is over and jen leaves how will he stay in control

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by Anonymous09/30/08

yes Tom has become hateful....

..if he was training them to become lovers of all things kinky and sexual but also kind people, then I'd have sympathy for him. However, I'm beginning to tire of his vindictiveness. There is a saying in my faith that you should meet a thought of hate with one of love. He needs to begin a process of 're-educating' them to be sexual beings but kind with it to others; even changing others in a positive way to their sexually open ways?

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by Anonymous10/20/08

only bad story in the series

turning them into babies was a little gross in my estimation. Aside from that this series is amazing. You should do more with Jennifer's and Suzanne's emotions. Whether they learn to love it or hate it, I want more detail.

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by Anonymous07/02/10

heck yea .... I would LOVE to read what goes on when Jodi gets there

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by Anonymous08/23/10

Cant Wait

Love every chapter, reading them over and over waiting for the next parts.

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by Anonymous11/04/10

Very good work.

I very much enjoyed reading the whole thing. I hope you make more and very soon. I am eager to read the rest of the story.

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by Anonymous01/15/11

more

More please.....

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by C_frommn10/14/11

Cruel and Unusual

To get a Story going so good and then leave us Hanging.
Jodi needs to be introduced to the Sisters and made a part of everything and as the Girl Jenni and Suzanne get into the Master and Humiliation the need for the Drug should decrease.
Anyways good story.

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by jdgray6802/01/12

More Please

I agree, I would really like to read more about these women, and the things Tom has in store for them. Please wrote more editions.

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by spankingfunfor06/08/12

The boss learns to need sex desperately and often!

This story about Tom teaching the boss how to get off sexually is one of the best!She hates losing control at first but after awhile sex is her primary objective!Jodi becomes Tom's sub because she wants to be and Tom is surprised but even though the story didn't go far enough is going to willingly help train Suzanne and her sister! No doubt she'll get plenty of the humiliation she craves as well as getting the sisters to want to willingly be sluts for Tom!Eventually it will be their normal way of life.Viva mind control!!

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by gondaol06/09/13

TIME FOR JODI

YOU STOPPED!

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by Anonymous03/09/14

When might we get new chapters.

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