All Comments on 'Spider-man/Avengers: Juice Ch. 02'

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Blue_SixBlue_Sixalmost 20 years ago
Spiderman's Party

I understand being lonely but why not focus on only one not all of them. By going after more then one he will cause friction between the ladies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good Start

A good start, the text could use a little more descriptive writing to it, but overall nice. I will be interested in more of the upcoming chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

http://www.toplessrobot.com/2010/07/fan_fiction_friday_spider-man_and_the_avengers_in.php Your fic has been given great honors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yo dog.

Wait what, magic cum? Yo man, I find this shit out of character as fuck. Spidey wouldn't say this shit. I do like Scarlet Witch and Spidey. Also Janet Van Dyne and Spidey. Bitches love Spider-Man. So why this out of character shit? It's not necessary when bitches love Spider-Man. Is this all some sort of conspiracy by Osborn during Dark Reign to get them sex addicted? That's some fucked up shit, son. You best improve this shit, holmes. Aight? Aight.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Anonymous *Yo Dog*

Shut the fuck up not like you wrote it also learn to spell, How do you know Spider-Man would act and what doe's dark reign have to do with anything going on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ever Heard of Fanfiction Friday?

You should look it up, they..."commented"... on the first chapter of this story.

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