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Just in Time

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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn06/04/04

This rocks!

and it rolls-very jazzy, nice feel on my tongue.

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by tungtied2u06/04/04

Coltrane is awesome

and so is this little number! Well represented and presented. Thank you maestro.

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by tungtied2u06/04/04

I'll say it again

Awesome!

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by tarablackwood2206/04/04

Wow!

This is simply magnificent. The certainty of your hand is always impressive, and to me seems magnified here. An awesome read!

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by normal jean06/04/04

impressive

I especially like your use of repetition and you just create such a wonderful mood, what a gifted writer you are!!

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by WickedEve06/04/04

Different?

I love it, but isn't this kind of different for you? I've read many of your poems and now I need to read the rest. I'm sure this is different. Different or not, matters not. This is good.

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