and it rolls-very jazzy, nice feel on my tongue.
and so is this little number! Well represented and presented. Thank you maestro.
This is simply magnificent. The certainty of your hand is always impressive, and to me seems magnified here. An awesome read!
I especially like your use of repetition and you just create such a wonderful mood, what a gifted writer you are!!
I love it, but isn't this kind of different for you? I've read many of your poems and now I need to read the rest. I'm sure this is different. Different or not, matters not. This is good.
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