All Comments on 'Lucky with the Landlords'

Few things turn off more than "slurp slurp"

This was one of the best stories I've ever read here! The passion and the erotic tension was so well described I felt like I was there. There has never been another story in Literotica that got me as horny as this one did.

It's amazing how often the greatest praise for stories here is applied to steaming piles of mediocrity It ain't great, but it ain't shit either. It just is.

I agree - "best story ever" is used too much. Quite a funny statement. Still, it's nice to hear. Regarding the "slurp slurp" bit...I write these stories for my own fantasy purpose, and at that moment in the jerk-off, I tend to breeze past blowjobs. If I write "slurp slurp" (and I only do four "slurps") it extends the sentence, thus forcing me to picture the blowjob, which in turn adds to my erotica. I'm just sharing my stories that are written for my own personal use, and my style won't change. But thanks for the input...

Great story!

This reviewer places this story (both chapters) after Infidelity Revisited, but before Reunion_Charmaine & Danny. Having broken up with Charmaine, Danny moves on to a new relationship, this one with Wendy, although it will not last. Five stars.