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Busty Adventures of Brittany Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Excellent!

I can't wait to read more of Brittany and her busty friends!

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by Anonymous06/14/04

great stuff

totally amazing, please write more :D

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Nice

Hot, sexy, etc. So why am I giving it only 75%? Because otherwise the other chapters would have no other way to go but down.

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by Enkil06/14/04

tittylicous

your first chapter is awesome! hope to see more reaaaalllly soon! gotta love the tit-fucking
~Sean~

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Fuck that Anon

Give it the credit it deserves.

Can't wait for the next installments!!!!!!

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by Anonymous06/15/04

Great story

Please Continue!

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by jclancy307/14/04

Beautiful

Awesome, Kimberly. You have a great imagination.

J

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by thewolfooo110/08/04

Can you count the mistakes???

She had came.....biggest set of balls Brittany ever seen.....enormous sport bra cased tits...... enormous torpedoes like boobs.

By the way torpedoes are long and thin....her boobs are like that????? Must hang to her feet then and the bra size would be 42long

Sorry kitten I'm done with you.

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by Anonymous12/20/04

I liked....

Nice story, but had its spelling and grammar mistakes.

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by Anonymous02/07/05

*yawn*

I got bored. There were too many spelling/grammar errors and it was repetitious.

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by bigwilliestyle03/14/05

Hot, hot, hot

This story is hot, hot, hot. I love this and all the continuing adventures of Brittany.

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by zaxxon09/17/05

Awesome

Yes there were spelling and grammar mistakes, but that didn't take away from the sheer passion and lust of the story. Amazingly hot! I'm hooked.

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by Anonymous08/20/06

Very bad writing

25 points for effort but you switch between verb tenses so frequently that it is distracting. And the story is NOT hot, it is juvenile at best.

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by CallistaLynae08/20/06

If you are a woman

I'm an alien from Jupiter. Go back to high school and remedial writing class and try to get it right. Because honestly, that sucked.

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by Anonymous04/23/07

sexually hot

i cummed so much after reading this story. i doubt ill be able 2 cum again for a month. keep up the good work. it would be hot if u continued the one with her uncle.

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by Anonymous07/10/07

Hot

I loved this story, I was wet after the first couple of paragraphs and am still thinking about those big titties with spunk all over them, good work :)

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by 03/21/08

wow!

nice!!!

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by Konyha10/17/09

Double E isn't a bra size

This is a hot story. The bra size is the only thing I noticed that was a tad off:
In the US or UK: It goes A B C D DD E F FF G. "DDD" in the US is "E" in the UK.

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by LongFatCock2205/06/10

OMG!!!

I cant believe how hard and horny this story made me!!!! Excellent story!!!! Two cocks up, I mean thumbs! haha

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by sensualwhispers08/27/10

english..???

i do not profess to be a professioal writer,however, as an avid reader of most genres i understand the need for a good basic knowledge of the english language. this story lacks even basic grammer and the use of tense is appalling.Was it even edited or was it just put straight onto the website?
A story no matter how short must flow and lead the reader in, this one coughed and spluttered from beginning to end. It is not a pleasent experience to reread sentences to gain an understanding of what the writer hopes to achieve, in this case wank fodder for the underactive imagination of a teenager.
This story if written right has the potential to have most men,and women, wanting to get their hands, mouths and cocks on Brittanys breasts. Untill the poor grammer and use of englisb is dealt with i fail to see that happening.Sorry.

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by DcupDaddy01/09/11

Bravo!

Your Brittany series is one that I read over and over. Although the spelling and grammar are atrocious, it gets me horny just reading about this crazy full figured girl getting it on! You should do more of her, just saying...

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by tnadnuder01/05/14

Elsewhere,...

Saw no way to comment at end of Ch. 8.

Lots of spelling mistakes. Also, teacher says it was a "different" her the previous day, AND that she needs to make up the test she missed the same day. Can't both be true!

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