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by tungtied2u

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
"dispersed"??

I feel let down by the pattern break in the final stanza.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
I agree

with YDD. (Did I really just say that?!?) I like this a lot, but the missing rhyme feels weird.

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