All Comments on 'A Breath Out Of Tune'

...stuff. So flowing and graceful. Magnificent reading.

I liked it alot.

Keep writing

: )

A relatively fresh voice presents

a complete and well structured/thought

poem of interesting imagery.

Some nice word play

with meaning, rhyme, and alliteration.

A good read.

Please let her keep her wits and her faith in self! Beautiful poem, Ms. Grail; I can feel the sweltering heat of the tent.

Especially the "god eat god" stanza. I've been searchin for the grail- hallelujah!

keep wring hun, and forget about numbers..every piece is so well written!

thanks for sharing!xo

Another lovely 'Randi' piece

With YDD praise, no less!

Desperately joining the hordes in a feeding frenzy as they look to - heaven for help. Does salvation come from above or from within...

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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in many parts and crescendoes. TK U MLJ LV NV