All Comments on 'Pan's pipes'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Your verse...

...continues to stregthen all the times, in every way. A fine offering.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
some

nice word choices and couplings here.

and a nice rhythm

thank you

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Plenty of Alliteration

The poem flows

well aided by

similar sounds.

I only object strongly

to "forest primeval".

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
has a nice

flow and I liked the thoughts behind the message....thanks...blue

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
very nice

I read the poem first, comments, then I respond. So, I see that forest primeval also didn't work for someone else. Try reading it without primeval. It flows much better.

Still, a very nice poem. Thank you!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Thanks

for the wonderful poem. Paints a wonderful picture of Pagan celebration. Well done.

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