by tungtied2u
...continues to stregthen all the times, in every way. A fine offering.
The poem flows
well aided by
similar sounds.
I only object strongly
to "forest primeval".
flow and I liked the thoughts behind the message....thanks...blue
I read the poem first, comments, then I respond. So, I see that forest primeval also didn't work for someone else. Try reading it without primeval. It flows much better.
Still, a very nice poem. Thank you!
for the wonderful poem. Paints a wonderful picture of Pagan celebration. Well done.