All Comments on 'A New Master'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Not bad

not bad...old master....selling of slave...new master...all good except i thought it could have used some more detail...story too brief

WFEATHERWFEATHERover 19 years ago
Good, but...

This feels more like the beginning to a series - is there going to be more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
very nice

I want more of this couple. Would love more details about what comes next with the two of them. Would love to see them fall in love and take this relationship to another level.

velvet passionvelvet passionover 18 years ago
more please!

excellent..but we need more..much more..

stunning!

velly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very Incomplete

No character development + no ending of any consequence = 1 rating

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