All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 01'

Now put your abilities to use but don't go overboard. Don't become a womanizer. Become a woman appreciater instead.

This was a nice set up to what I hope is a good story with great sex.

Great Start, Cant wait to see where the story goes

I have read this story a few months ago on this same website. . . why the repost???

it was a great start. please continue.

I agree with all the reviews I've read. It was a great start.

It took to long for the set-up.

A good start. Perhaps a little slow on the setup but assuming this will be a long story that's ok. Hopefully you'll avoid the mistakes of others and not follow the "Power corupts, but then he realizes the error of his ways" path. I'd also avoid the "you're the son of a god" angle and that's why you were chosen.

Some interesting potential angles here with the restrictions. He can't influence the political process but what happens if the government starts coming after him? How much can he do before he's in violation of his agreement?

like the others said a good start. now lets get to it

I JUST READ YOUR STORY "GIFT FROM A GOD" . YOUR NAME WILL BE ON MY VERY SHORT LIST OF AUTHORS TO CHECK BACK ON FOR MORE WORDERFUL READING. I DO HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE THIS STORY INTO MANY CHAPTERS.

YOUR FAN, RON.

This was a great introduction to what could be a very interesting tale. You left most everyone wanting more.

Nice to see you moved over too. Too bad about the Blues. Same for the Canucks.

Do tell!

You do a great job painting the picture with words. Can't wait to read more.

I'm ready for more. Soon please

I absolutly loved your story. You're very eloquent and the concept is one I've been dying to see used for awhile now. Please write more! Much more! ^^

Very good start to what looks like a quite enjoyable series.

It's just too bad that it simply occoured to him that he could do anything he wanted. The better question would be: Should he take advantage of his newly bestowed power, or wait until he has a firmer grasp of his abilities and limitations? In essence, when it comes to using such power, it's not can he, but should he?

Thoughtfully yours,

Kydreamer

This is the only way I could think of to reply to some of the wonderfull comments I've been given.

First off: Kydreamer

I've worked really hard to include some morality and internal struggle into the story. Man vs. Himself as it were. It's not apparent in this chapter, but in the upcoming ones that will be posted soon, I explore that aspect. Good comment.

Punji:

I'd like to respond to your comments but that would be giving spoilers and I don't like to give it away. Hopefully I handle the conflicts to your satisfaction.

To the person who said it took to long to set up:

In my mind I'm writing an actual story that just happens to have graphic sex in it. Following that route, it moves more slowly then your typical fuck and suck story. I apologize if this is not to your liking, but hopefully I can keep you interested inspite of that.

To "Saw this story before"

Yes, this story is posted on another site, but, as many here who have came over can tell you, that site sucks now. So I went looking for other sites. I promise it's not copied.

And to Blue_Six:

I've asked some of my female readers about how I portray and treat women in the story and they assure me that it's done respectfully. The charachter is not a chauvanist(sp) and I believe I make that clear in later chapters. He has his moments, but all in all, he is a good guy, not out to hurt people.

And to everyone else, thanks so much for the feedback. I've gotten 6 chapters written so far including this one, and the 7th is in the works. You won't have to wait much longer for the story to continue.

-S-

Excellent story. Perfect setup for the chapters that I hope are to follow. Perfect portrayal of the character and his struggles. I think we all would think those things if given such power. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

Its a great story but I have read it before or one just like it.

Have you posted this story to a different story site ?

I cannot remember where I read it at but it is the same as

I have already read.

You have a good start and I like the idea and would like to read more of your story

It's a good start to the story, you have set it up well for the next chapter. The portrayal of the characters was also very good and I luck forward to reading the next part of the story

I've read this story on the other site, and loved it there. I look forward to new chapters here. Keep up the good work.

Your story is well written and at some point, I believe most of us have had this fantasy. Of course the peril for him is whether he will be able to keep himself under control. Is there enough of the good guy there?

Question: Can he manipulate and change, physical things?

Can he make himself bigger physically.....sexually?

I enjoyed the first chapter, although this sentence:

"“Darn, did the eyes give me away. Happens every time," he said, with a sarcastic smirk. "Yes, I’m a God."

Is a little jarring, especially without the question mark. Overall a good job though, and it wasn't incredibly slow going like too many other stories.

Is this all, only 10 short ch. If you had this as a book, I would get it asap.

I really like the story. and good mormon joke to ;)

Good one.

I'd probably react like this... Wonder where it goes from here.

You've set up a story line with endless possibilities. Nice work

......so good

Lots of possibilities but didn't really like the randomness of the guy receiving powers. The greek or roman gods although powerful were never known to bestow kindness just for no reason.

lol

"Jesus, corky little bustard that one" you killed me with that one

But all in all, the story rocks for days, even though it's still in the beginning I know that I am going to follow it 'till the end.

I thought my great great great grandson said not to tell people, dumbass

We all awaIting more from you

I recently started your series, not much into “mind control” but the writing appears to be far superior to the “suck and fuck” type. I am intrigued at where this will go and the potential for quality eroticism. I’m hooked.

I like it so far. Keep going, the possibilities are endless.