All Comments on '1st Affair: Untold Stories Ch. 02'

by X-Factor

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
vision1032avision1032aover 19 years ago
Awesome

Very hot and to the point. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
the fiance

I guess when her fiance finds out she cheated on him he`ll drop her like a hot whor.

Atlanta,Ga.

softtouchmesofttouchmeover 16 years ago
gr8 work

very well crafted awesome pls send it to me in my email id love to read such a marvelous work my id is softnsmooth2000@yahoo.com, hope to hv ur work soon,chilll

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
How sad.

The girl has psychological problems. That is not sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Average

This was a very dull and uninspiring story. It lacked subelty and sophistication. It was a meeting with her patents... Who the he'll cares even slightly if you were to miss that?! Yourstory is only plausible if the parents are on their death bed or, alternatively, if the girl was 13 years old. However then your story would be about statutory rape. Plot holes aplenty.

It needs to be spiced up somehow... Perhaps with the advent of the woman having a third nipple.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I'm all wet! Thanks for sharing :)

jimjam69jimjam69over 2 years ago

Hot little bitch got a good fucking.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I love the foot fetish angle… kudos

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userX-Factor@X-Factor
2098 Followers
I am Jordan Xavier, known as X-Factor on Literotica since 2001. Excuse the 20-year-old stories - I was quite new. And young. Follow on Twitter @XFactorErotica for updates Now out on Amazon - Cottage on the Beach: This Passionate May-December Romance Needs to be Hidden - An ...