by X-Factor
I guess when her fiance finds out she cheated on him he`ll drop her like a hot whor.
Atlanta,Ga.
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This was a very dull and uninspiring story. It lacked subelty and sophistication. It was a meeting with her patents... Who the he'll cares even slightly if you were to miss that?! Yourstory is only plausible if the parents are on their death bed or, alternatively, if the girl was 13 years old. However then your story would be about statutory rape. Plot holes aplenty.
It needs to be spiced up somehow... Perhaps with the advent of the woman having a third nipple.