All Comments on 'Her Awakening Ch. 02'

Great story! I love the sensuality in your writing, it paints very erotic pictures of your stories, I hope there will be ch.03 :)

I loved the story. Very romantically erotic. Well-paced in buliding to full intimacy.

Cathlene!!!

Just read your wonderful submission, It was a wonderful storie. It was so well writen that it made me feel that I was the one with her. Hope to see more of your submissions soon.

Drphel

You do not find stories like this one every day, especially one so well written and thought out. I presume you wouldn't mind if I use your story as an example to try imitate, do you?

I really like the way you flesh out the characters with their objectives clearly stated and realized. What a fantasy for any woman who desires more than just a casual fuck, but a meaningful and fulfilling experience that both can cherish forever!

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I enjoyed reading this story! it is nice and very well written.