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by lostandfounder06/17/04

Loved it except....

for the phrase "slut within"...it just seems so at odds with the rest of the piece...overall, great work.

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by Syndra Lynn06/17/04

I gotta give it a 5!

and "slut within" is perfectly acceptable and fits the person as well as the poem.

Syn

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by WickedEve06/17/04

dear slut within :)

This was my favorite part:
Exquisite limbs and aching form
House the slut within

I'd rethink the cliche of lustful passions.

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