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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/26/04

Sorry, I don't think it works

I found this a very dry piece. Whilst it was horific, it certainly wasn't erotic. The heroine was never given a personality other than her bravery. I just couldn't connect with it.

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by goro goro02/14/05

Non-erotic horror

Nothing is as horrific as the real world tragedies. You have captured the cruelty of the concentration camps very well in this short, but powerful story.

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by Marcus Victory09/06/05

A very touching piece

A very good piece not erotic but still fantastic

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by darkraven190007/26/06

great story

i was drawn by the use of POE, great short story, great imagination; wish i could say more, but im not good at giving feedback.

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by Anonymous11/11/10

good

though it didn't go itno the true horrors of her experiences it gave enough to still chill the bones

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by deadsoon12/14/10

Tears in my eyes after reading this

I dont understand how people can be so cruel and inhumane. Your story describes one (just one) of the worst scenarios and I shudder because, God help us, that innate cruelty of man is alive today. I see it in acts of rage, anger and hate that occur across this world on a daily basis.

A well written tale that I never expected to read on this site, having said that, thanks for sharing it.

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by Anonymous02/02/13

sorry but that didn't work

the second hand narrative puts us too distant from the events. Didn't grab

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