All Comments on 'The Horse of Her Dreams'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sweet

A very sweet story that might have been absolutely wonderful if a little bit maore detail was given to what happened after the husband dies.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

It was a good story till the end. It just came to a flying finish like you had to hurry and get it done.

The story should have developed more slowly and built up to the ending you had.

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