All Comments on 'Devil In The Details'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Another great story

Sure would love to have a wife like that..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very cute

We all need a little well done humor

now and then.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GOOD ONE

It was good to read a story that had some humor.

Horny Truck Driver

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Syph Sux

They shoulda had a gross of extra-strength condoms taped to their thighs. Course, that don't do shit 'ginst crab lice!

4*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just ugly

Who wants a slut for a wife? He should have spent his time and money on getting a divorce and taking the bitch to the cleaners. What a crock.

1zardoz956081zardoz95608over 10 years ago
Huh???????

I am confused...Who was Ham?

WAFOLD52WAFOLD52almost 10 years ago

JUST READ THIS AGREE WITH WHICH I HAD A WIFE LIKE THIS(INTELLIGENT) AND A LIFE LIKE THE HUSBAND (INTELLIGENT)

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
I thought...

I thought the husband was smart and had sold them to a pimp...But no..One of the worst stories I have read...

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 9 years ago
What was that??

No developed characters, a somewhat warped content and no proper ending. Sorry..this one did nothing for me..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
poor tale

nothing good about this tale. a pair of whores do anything with a dick and

do not get paid. a husband who gets little revenge and joins in at the end.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

What a pussy of a husband.

Finds out his wife is a betraying cheating cunt for years fucking something like 20 guys and he thinks revenge is letting the cunt fuck them again.

conniving, intelligent? what a fucking crock.

More like a pathetic cuck.. soon he will be wearing frilly knickers and begging his wife to bring him home some cream pies.

A half arsed story of a cheating cunt whore and a pathetic wimp piece of a shite married to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
easy to know

The author is female

Better get checked

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Mental much?

Why do these stories all read like they were written by a man?

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A BIG BUILD UP TO A FLOP

What a fucking waste of time this one was and is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This is a miss.

I find it more likely that the women called the police and filed rape charges against all involved and then filed for a divorce. Horrible ending.

nixroxnixroxabout 3 years ago

not worth a comment

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too big a fantasy to elicit any emotion. Boring. Predictable ending.

peterb5740peterb5740over 2 years ago

S T Ds anyone check??

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Not even worth dissing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So far beyond any reality that this story must have imagined itself while residing at the bottom of a waste bin.

iammweaseliammweaselalmost 2 years ago

When God decided to create humans with a deformed, non-working cranial region you were his prototype but then he decided what he created was too far off the sane scale and essentially you became one of a kind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not particularly erotic. Just plain stupid. Only two stars ⭐️ for this one.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Just plain awful

KiwihunterKiwihunter5 days ago

Brilliant. Just the right way to wind up the toss pot btb wankers

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