All Comments on 'Amante'

something like this a while ago....

Now I see what it should have looked like

beautiful

romantic

gentle

whispers in Spanish.......

muy bueno senorita

las lenguas juntas. Should this:

and hold you, hold you though dying night

be through the night? Good work

Glad you kept the Spanish to a minimum. Each Spanish word had more impact that way and blended more smoothly into the poem.

this poem

Soft and flowing, liquid beauty...well done!

~Merry

beautiful ... "para tú" maybe should have been "para tí" ... but piddling business, that. God this is a lovely piece of art.

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