All Comments on 'Sex With My Cousin Ch. 01'

You had a fantastic beginning, and up until the 80% point, it was a great story. But you no sooner got to the point where you broke the tension with your cousin than you ended it, abbreviating everything that happened after.

I would suggest that you take a step back and rewrite the last quarter of your story... you did a great job building the sexual tension... the story deserves to have it finished off appropriately. Take your time... this should have been a two page story.

this writer sounds like a grade school drop out. the story needs a total rewrite and a GOOD EDITOR.

I like this story. Short and sweet and realistic.

it's always great to fuck family