All Comments on 'Putting In Time'

by Barushko

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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
putting in time, yes

"Filling these shadow

holes with clones

dulls the pain"

this part made me cry

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
the last stanza..

was my favorite. indeed!

i enjoyed this!

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
Agree

Robin red may not be the best phrase to start with, but I admire this simplicity and economy of words, and the last stanza, well I agree with my betters before me.

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