All Comments on 'Birthday Treat'

Wow - what a treat. That story had everything that turns me on. You had him tied and blindfolded - and then the pleasure was enough for everyone ! Even the surprise ending treatment was a thrill.

Thanx for the great fantasy story.

Planet TJ

I don't think I have ever cum like that in my LIFE!!!

PLEASE make a sequel to this, or a follow up of their next trist!!!!

Lisa was not a treat for Keith. He knows nothing about her participation.

So the treat from Keith's perception is simply a lot of very good hot sex with his wife, crowned with the sweet frosting of her giving anal.

His wife could have provided everything he received without Lisa. Just as Keith thinks she did.

So, she provided her husband a magnificent "Birthday Treat." Most husbands would be quite happy and satisfied (I would).

But Lisa was not part of his "Birthday Treat. "

His wife treated herself through Lisa.

And treated Lisa.

Poor Keith's brain got no treat from Lisa.

An interesting story

that did not measure up to its potential.

Possibly the sequel (Sue, Keith & Lisa) can partially rectify this.

Paul in Oklahoma