All Comments on 'The Beginning of the End'

I'm a beginner, yet I still found the last two lines out of place.

Not being a poet, I seldom read poetry. If it builds a picture for me, and induces some emotion, I like it, if not, I don't.

This read as if from the heart. I could empathise with the subject. As such, it scores high for me. I'll be reading more of your offerings.

Thanks.