All Comments on 'The Gift'

Very powerful:

There is no sin

in singing sighs wet

with breathless strength

like gull cries over cracks

of ocean gray with splashing

and their restless skies.

splashes and tickles, yet reminds that nothing is forever. thanks :)

....is right. Really packs a wallop, and some lines just stun!!......"Love glues days.".....I wanted to say that!