All Comments on 'What You Can't Have'

The title of my coment says it all. This is one of the best erotic stories ever.

I have been reading stories for years and it is great to have a new author that can tell a wonderful story. As good anything on the entire site.

I loved it - really well constructed and very hot.

Write more soon

I really liked it. Write more soon.

Even with all the grammatical errors (spelling, etc.), I had no difficulty following along and imagining myself being pounded, and duped, as she had been. What a wondefully, wicked twist.

Loved it. Everyone should read this story

Brilliant story. Well paced, building to a immense climax (for me as well).

Besides the bad editting/grammar the story was incredible!!! Awesome twist at the end and I love the borderline ass rape!!!!

One of the hotest stories I have read and what an ending!

Loved it, especially the twist at the end. If there were any spelling/grammar mistakes, I didnt catch them since I was way to engrossed with the story. Keep it up!

Loved it & the twist at the end!!!!

Impressive--pant wheeze pant and also the reason i always wear my ring when clubbing. ;) Would love to read more from you.

Except for a few grammar mistakes, this was an incredible encounter.

Tastefully written, and the storyline kept building to the multiple orgasms for both.

Ladies I have been with say an anal orgasm is far superior to a vaginal or clitorial orgasms.

Write more ! You have the gift..

"Dan-o" michael_miller1950@yahoo.com

That was just awesome.

What a lucky cab driver.

As for the gramat... what crap, we arnt reading Shakespeare

OMG!!!!! he's single?!?!?! That was such a twist. I love him!!! Plz write another one!!!!!

Lol I love the fact him and I share the same name, it was a great read and I wasnt expecting the ending. Good job

Loved the way you described how he ate her ass out. I wouldn't have been able to stop that soon. Excellant way of describing how he screwed her tight tail hole. Awesome surprise ending. 5 stars from me. Write more please.

Awesome. Hot. Really hit home with the epilogue, a buddy of mine used to do that. Almost sad, but it worked every time.