by seasparks
There once was a guy from Nebraska
Whom I originally thought said Alaska
He shows off his style
Makes us wait a while
Then amazes us with his talent (sorry couldn't think of another aska word LOL)
Keep up the awesome work seasparks!!! ;-)
Damn this story brought back memories of days in the oil patch and the nights at the bars playing cards. Keep up the writing. I can't wait to read more.
this is an example of an excelltn short sotry. I loved it! and here I normally don't read the non-erotic, but the topic drew me in! good show. I'd love to read your follow up, if you write one...
Brilliant! I don't normally read non-erotic stories, but the title reeled me in. The buildup of the character in the first few paras made the story. You know him, yet he still has a aura of mystery surrounding him. I love the 'traveller' aspect of him.
Good plot? O. K. Characterizarions. But Way too short, or maybe not. It just may be perfect.