All Comments on 'Table Stakes'

by seasparks

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doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
HOT!!!!

There once was a guy from Nebraska

Whom I originally thought said Alaska

He shows off his style

Makes us wait a while

Then amazes us with his talent (sorry couldn't think of another aska word LOL)

Keep up the awesome work seasparks!!! ;-)

Lord DragonsWingLord DragonsWingalmost 20 years ago
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn this story brought back memories of days in the oil patch and the nights at the bars playing cards. Keep up the writing. I can't wait to read more.

gypsyshadegypsyshadealmost 20 years ago
Well done.

this is an example of an excelltn short sotry. I loved it! and here I normally don't read the non-erotic, but the topic drew me in! good show. I'd love to read your follow up, if you write one...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant! I don't normally read non-erotic stories, but the title reeled me in. The buildup of the character in the first few paras made the story. You know him, yet he still has a aura of mystery surrounding him. I love the 'traveller' aspect of him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fullhouse? Straight flush?

Moronic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
a real short story

Good plot? O. K. Characterizarions. But Way too short, or maybe not. It just may be perfect.

stinger82stinger82over 3 years ago
I liked it

Thanks for posting

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