All Comments on 'Jen's Trip Ch. 02'

Excellent!! I can see things getting kinkier and dirtier, mmm, just how we like it ;) Can't wait for chapter 3..

It gets dirtier by the Minute grrrrrr are "WE" gonna have an Orgy mhhhhhh looking forward to the next Chapter

Every bit as good as the first chapter!

I hope you never tire writing this story Lisa...

Out.

Lisa, you're so naughty...I love this chapter, even better than the first! I'll be your subbie anytime! You are amazing!

Do we mind that you went lesbian in this chapter, you ask? I think I speak for everyone when I say, "Heck no!"

Let the hi-jinks continue in chapter 3!

Please continue!! Love the nastiness and the possibilities on this trip are endless.

But fun, fun, fun!

esl

great writing Lisa ... *drool*

I can picture the girls in the hotel room...

now I cant wait for part 3

even better lisa

Good storyline and descriptions, nice build up to the hot sex

Just loved it! Can't wait for the next wonderful chapter! The vision of these lovely creatures playing in my mind was a total turn on and treat! Keep them cumin and I will be UP for more!

cant wait to read what happends next! Definitely a cock stroker! (or a clit twitcher)

SMILE!

Drew

Loved it. Thought I could help Jen oout and provide the cock (if required). Lube it with KY oil and slowly slide my cock into Lisa's ass, stretching her, the intensity of it. While Jen and the other girls played with her and each other.

Great chapter Lisa, I am a man but I love being in the same room with ladies that are enjoying them selves it is a pleasureto give them what they really want after they get them selves really wet andready for my cock.

Great story keep it up and I will as well

i liked it lisa, as good as chapter 1

Fantastic! Really sexy. Only giving you a 75 so you'll wrack your brain trying to make the next one even hotter and kinkier!

even better then the first incredibly hot

even better than the first lisa

Amazing story, you've got a great way with words that lets you be able to visualize the scenes in your story and pretend like you're actually there watching it all happen which makes it that much hotter! Thanks for the great orgasm!

Things are heating up. Look forward to Part 3. Very hot series.

Lisa I found this one too and came again. Do I have to say montreal for you to know who. I have sonya on the phone and she can not find them-you emailed some thing wrong

This is good Lisa but nobody else can make it work but brainy me. I am mailing it to [the gang]. Sonya

Bring on chapter 3!!!

I'm salivating ;-)

I'd take you over my knee, but I think you'd slip right off with all of the juices you've got running in this hotel room...

I used to travel to NYC regularly - I wish I would have known about this hotel back then!

this one's even more imaginative than the first, and is begging, screaming to be continued!!!

i cant wait for part 3 to cum!

Don't rush it. Make sure you are happy with it before you submit. Otherwise, excellent.

smiles

SN

Hot story! Are the boys on the staff going to come round and fuck them all later?

You naughty girl! After part one, I thought you were writing as Jen. Then Lisa walks in! Can't wait to read more more more!

Hi, there. I like your writing. Keep it up. I am becoming something of a fan of yours.

fafite@msn.com

- Wolfgirl.

i like this one even more

This is hot! You did an outstanding job with this story! Make sure you continue this one, because it really gets the job done.

Please continue this story SOON!!! You did an amazing job, Lisa!!!

Quite an erotic story! Please keep it going. You've got me right where you want me.....Hard and dripping with excitement!

Very spicy & naughty. You touched me "G" spot!

wow...i like to read stories and get wet from them but this one made me soaking wet! you are a fabulous writer. keep up the good work. please let me know when you write any more. rach_1072@hotmail.com

Ch01. was good. But there was little going on. Now

Lisa jumps into full tilt boogie, with a classic reversal of power roles skillfully executed. Hot Lisa Denton is going on my favorite authors list.

very erotic and a fun read. Hope your computer is more cooperative soon!!

Great story Lisa...

Just add a man doing you as well...it would make it hotter

I wasn't sure which of them was in control! Delightful read. I love the viewpoint that comes through that sex is FUN, dammit!

thing that I've got a copy of your diary. I think you know the drill...

*smirk*

awesome smut, sexy!

You are really good, very sexy without to much hard stuff. Suggest you get down to writing with Charley H for some highly sensual girl/girl fun with lots of touching and kissing of pussy through panties. PS LOVE PHOTO OF YOUR PANTIES

OMG you cant just skip the orgy, talk about cliff hanger please this series needs a 2.5!!

Hallo Lisa!

Well written, and worth everybit of 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms!

*((Hope you don’t mind I went lesbian with this chapter, it was a personal preference.))* _ DON'T MIND ?.... Fuck!.... You gotta be fucking kidding, that is one damb sexy hot lesbian sex story!.... I just wish there were a hell of a lot more like this,,, yes!

Thank-you, for sharing your lovely hot lesbian sex story with all of us!

Gay Kat.