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by Anonymous

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by bamagirl07/27/04

Wonderful

As always a wonderful tale :)

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by Joseki Ko08/01/04

Grins

Now that's some artwork

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by Du Lac12/23/04

Yin and Yang of rhetoric

Art..
Not only can you write a splendid poem but.. your stories are laced with detail and steam. Luring one into the moment, art moving into visions of reality. You are a wonderful writer.. and I learn from you always...
Thanx for the read..
Du Lac

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by Anonymous05/14/07

Use Big People Words

Come on...WTF? love muscle? ...my third leg...latch on my pants...like a cat with its paw in the fish tank...my stiff rod...More slippery than grease on a door knob...my love syrup

Descriptive my ass...this is just full of sophomoric similes and metaphors.

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