by babyblue2
I really liked your tale,and to me it was very well written. I look forward seeing if you decide to take the neophyte further down a new path for her??Id personally love to see her slip slowly into a brand new way of life,and really get so good at it!!Keep writing,and take care.cs.
OH YEA, I SINCERELY HOPE THAT THERE WILL BE SOME MORE OF IT, AND NOT LEAVE JUST HANGING WITH JUST ONE CHAPTER,HOPEFULLY YOU WILL CONTINUE THE STORY
OOOh, how hot and wet I got reading this - tell us some more pleeaase....
you should never force yourself on to someone, and you should not handcuff them either unless you both agree, no matter if it worked or not